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Gonna rant a bit.

Robinโ€™s interlude with Pez is, for me, the weakest part of the book and possibly the series. Besides being grossly unethical (snogging one of the two remaining principal murder suspects?), itโ€™s also ridiculously implausible and borderline suicidal.

Robinโ€™s still-evident PTSD (she had a panic attack just hours earlier during Hugh Jacksโ€™ phone tirade) conveniently becomes manageable when Pez thrusts his tongue in her mouth without warning and in public. Fears about her wig shifting and being discovered evaporate as Pez grabs the back of her head and kisses her forcefully enough to make their teeth bang together. Being goaded to drink and the possibility of being drugged and assaulted should be a strobing red light. Yet Robin allows her libido and ego to override her normal good judgement and embraces the role of honey trap. She is risking the reputation and perhaps survival of the agencyโ€”not to mention her own survivalโ€”for a little foreplay . . . and thatโ€™s utterly out of character.

I also wonder how JKR, a strong feminist, reconciles the insights that incels and other maladjusted males might take away from Robinโ€™s encounter with Pez (should any ever read IBH).

With echos of Kosh lines, the Pez Pierce playbook for getting into a womanโ€™s pants can be seen as:

โ€”find some socially sanctioned way to expose your junk to potential dates.

โ€”paint a large, graphic, coital mural on your wall; remember, itโ€™s all about the penis and hard core is a great way to calm their reservations!

โ€”skip bathingโ€”pheromones will always override BO.

โ€”when sheโ€™s least expecting itโ€”and without romantic preludeโ€”surprise your date with your tongue! This can be extra effective if you distract her with some pretext, like a neck tattoo, that lures her close enough to strike.

โ€”pressure her to drink upโ€”liquor is quicker!

In short, relentless sexual pressure is your friend! Even educated, โ€œhard-to-getโ€ girls on a first dateโ€”like Robinโ€”wonโ€™t be able to resist.

Finally, since absolutely nothing of value to the investigation was gained during this contrived interlude, its only purpose was shock valueโ€”both for the reader and for Strike.

Iโ€™ve grown to appreciate IBH more upon a second reading, but this remains a low point.

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Brian Runyon's avatar

Anyone else found Nutley to be comic relief? I know I did. As for the online chats, tend to skip them in the audio recording, unless I find something useful. Big fan of thrillers, especially the psychological kind that have you do some critical thinking.

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